Shade-of-the-night - commission

a commission for who waited VERY patiently for my snail tail to finish this and i thank them so much for it. now that I'm out of school, I'm able to get things done at a slightly quicker pace.

I'm okay with this, but I'm not too happy with the shading...

let me know if everything is okay, if you don't like it i'll TRY (no solid guarantee I'll do better) to fix it. if i can't i'll be happy to refund the points.